2014 Term 3 Writing
We are learning to:
write a description
use an iPad or Mac laptop to publish our writing
read our writing in a clear voice in front of an audience
We can do this when we can:
use interesting words, write sentences that make sense, use describing words and edit and read our work.
Teacher Comment:
You have used some describing words. Your next step is to add more describing words to your writing.
I like the way your words match your mind map.
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